परछाई बनकर लुभाती रही है
खुशियाँ मुझको दौडाती रही है
कितना दौडा हूँ , कितना भागा हूँ
खाली है दामन , कुछ ना पाया हूँ ।
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wonderful writing,
But it could make more impact if you don't use हूँ
in following lines
कितना दौडा हूँ , कितना भागा हूँ
खाली है दामन , कुछ ना पाया हूँ ।
I personally feel that.....
pyar se bhi jaroori kahin kaam hai
pyar sabkuch nahin aadmi ke liye.
cheer up man
goorookoolam
urf
prita
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